Front Cover Page, Content Page and Feedback from my target audience

This is my front magazines with contents page about a story where will somebody get the new headmaster and any other information. On the front magazines we see all what is of a normal front magazine. Dates, Button from the school, prize, barcode, headline etc.

I got a focus audience from my school magazines and I’ve asking  what there thought about my first draft:

Connor said that the front cover looks good, but of the contents page they can't see sarah of the little picture with chris.

Chris like the front cover with the shebbear emblem and prize label. But he said that i have write wrong the one sentence: "What did he will promise?"

Sarah said the she thinked it's weird that the background from the front cover is whit and from the Contents page black. 

(I know, the picture is make from me very bad)