Second Draft of Content Page

In my second Draft I complete my exercise and fixed all points what I should improve. It got just one negative point. There is no colour. Despite the often sampling i couldn't change the without to ruined my picture. Whatever! I added a description under the title. Another point is that I change the picture in the middle because there couldn't see anything on the picture. But this make no different because the new one picture looks very similar to the old one picture. On top of everything I added a little bit advertising below there.